{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"22373725","dateCreated":"1270316716","smartDate":"Apr 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bambam513","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bambam513","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1288115951\/bambam513-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ticommentary.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/22373725"},"dateDigested":1532128707,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"wow ","description":"i think if your hero does somthing bad they should but T.I did notthing bad soooo he didn't need to go to jail","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"21484883","dateCreated":"1268408535","smartDate":"Mar 12, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"msposta","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msposta","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ticommentary.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/21484883"},"dateDigested":1532128708,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Commentary Essay","description":"Overall rubric 3\/4
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\nStrenghts:
\nGreat introduction with hook and clear claim.
\nGreat use of commentary throughout the body of your essay.
\nGood counter argument.
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\nImprove:
\nDraw comparisons of TI and other people who have been in the same circumstances
\nImprove your conlusion by giving a call to action","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}